Hello everyone,
Well, we have the 2012 winners. The first prize goes to Kanna. The second prize goes to Chosu, and the third prize goes to Ara. Mr. Benevides and Mr. Gray both enjoyed all the stories very much. Kanna, Choshu and Ara each win a book in the Choose Your Own Adventure series, which is edited by Marcos Benevides.
Here are the winning stories:
Kanna’s Story
A
few years after the case, Ellie visited the town for her work. She went to the
Reed’s house but there was nothing where the house once stood. After a while,
Ellie found a swanky café that looked like a good place to rest. She walked
into the café and she was surprised to see an unexpected face.
“You
are…Mr. Reed!”
“I
remember you are Detective Koo. Long time no see.”
Evan
Reed was wearing a black apron and handling a white coffee cup. He seemed to
have more gray hair than before.
“Are
you working in this shop?”
“Yes,
I’m the owner of this coffee shop. After Nancy was arrested, I made it using my few remaining funds,” said Evan gently. “Please have a seat.”
Ellie
sat down at the counter seat in front of him.
“Are
you ready to order?”
“Coffee,
please.”
“Certainly.”
He
began making coffee and started to speak about himself and his family.
According
to Evan, Judith sold off all her collections of stamps, and then she stopped
going to auctions. Now she is living modestly.
Kevin
is working at a bookstore in the next town. He has working honestly everyday.
He will finish paying the debt to his friend in the near future.
Allison
has worked as a psychological counsellor. Miguel became a doctor at Georgetown
University Hospital. They were married three years ago and have two children,
boy and girl twins. The happy couple visit the Evan's cafe with their cute
angels from time to time.
“In
my childhood, my dream was to become a cook,” said Evan, putting a coffee cup
in front of Ellie. “Although I'm not a chief of a restaurant regrettably, I'm
glad to be able to cook for someone.”
The fragrant aroma of coffee beans maked Ellie relax.
She sipped it, and she felt happy.
“Now
living is much more difficult than before, but I feel fulfilled
everyday”, he said cheerfully.
“Certainly, we were falling apart because of what happened,
but we were able to restart a new life, thanks to the incident.”
“Thank you for the delicious coffee.” Ellie paid for the coffee. She stood up and went to the exit.
“Detective! …Nancy
will be released on parole soon. I'm going to go to meet her. After that, I
will work hard here with her.” Evan said with sincere eyes.
Ellie turned and smiled at him.
“I will come here again with my friend.”
She left the shop, with beaming feelings. Then she
wished him and his family luck.
Choshu’s Story
Fourteen
years have passed since the case of the Inverted Eagle. Ellie's daughter; Sofia
is twenty-six years old now. She has graduated from Stanford with a degree in
law. She works in Washington D.C. as a detective. Of course, Ellie works there too.
Sofia has a boyfriend (she had said
she would never have a boyfriend!).The boy's name is
Barn. He works at a circus, The Shooting Stars as a swing performer. He is twenty-seven years old,
stylish and shy. He
is not good at the swing, but he is a hard worker so he is hopeful.
Sofia and Barn have a date once
in a while. They are
very happy when they meet each other and talk while eating dinner, or they go for a drive, or take
a walk in the park. They want to get married as soon as possible but there is a
problem; Barn has a lot of debt from his parents, therefore Ellie is against their
marriage. Barn's parents passed away when he was seventeen, and they left a
debt; $5000, so he should pay it.
Sofia decides to marry Barn and help
him pay his debt, at any cost. Sofia works very hard. She always solved the
cases admirably. She solved difficult cases one after another and she saved
money to supplement his debt.
Barn also managed to earn money. He worked
very hard and practiced swing skills. He made remarkable progress on
the swing. He
mastered The Swan Dive, The Fly Low Like a Eagle, The Peacock Loop, The
Shooting Stars, The Six Jump, The First Dream, and The Final Project. His performance
was a great success and always crowded. He paid
back the money
little by little and Ellie admired his efforts.
At last, Barn and Sofia paid back
all the debt!! Ellie said "You have a good boyfriend, Sofia. I have no
worry." Sofia was so happy that she danced for joy and kissed Barn.
Ellie and Sofia and Barn relaxed in
their garden and watched the three children pleasantly playing detective and
circus performer like their parents.
A lot of flowers were in bloom and
the bracing air of early spring surrounded them.
Ara’s Story
One month after Miguel moved out of the Reed house, he found a house near his own college.
His mother, Lucia is stayed at the Reed house, because she took care of Judith Reed. He started
single life, but it was is very hard. He started a part time
job to earn house rent. So he had
no time to study. Every day he studied past midnight, and he met Allison every
weekend. So he had no rest time. One day he caught a cold. Allison was surprised because
Miguel proudly said he never got sick. So Allison decided to break up with Miguel and
told him, "I will always love you, but
this situation is bad. So we have to break
up." Miguel didn't say "OK." But it was a painful choice for Allison too, and this situation
was his own doing. Finally he said "OK." But he decided
he would become involved with Allison again.
One year later, he graduated college at the top of his class. His land lord let him stay in the house rent free in return for teaching his children. So he had more time to study. Miguel searched for Allison. He wanted to tell her. At
last he found Allison. He ran, and he said, "Allison. I always think of you. I have always loved you. Please marry me." Allison
in tears just said, " Of course."
