Toyo Gakuen University 応用英語I-3B Writing Unit 6: It's a Party Part 2

Hello everyone,
Today we will continue working on our next task - writing a notice　（お知らせ） and writing a paragraph about a party.
First, let's review some vocabulary. Please click this link: 基礎英吾ステップ１
Now let's practice typing. Let's practice typing with some new games. Please click the links and play
Alpha Attack and Air Typer

Now let's upload our seal to fotobabble.Then read and record the paragraph that you wrote about your seal. Finally, share your fotobabble with me. Next week I will display your fotobabbles here, so we can see and enjoy everyone's seals.

Now, let's return to Task 2: It's a Party. Your homework for today is to write the first draft of your paragraph about your party. Don't forget to check the style sheet. You must send me your paragraph by Tuesday the 9th of November at 6 pm.
Enjoy!

Toyo Gakuen University 応用英語1-3A Writing Lesson 11 An ideal Partner

Hey there!
Today we prepare for our next task. Our next task is a paragraph describing our ideal partner. First, let's learn some new words. Click this link: 応用英語1-3A Writing.

Now let's look at a paragraph written by a student at Shibaura Institute of Technology.

My Ideal Partner by Yuri K.

Adapted from an image uploaded to Flickr by Mark Sebastian

               What kind of partner do I want? First, I want a partner who likes traveling because I want to go to a lot of places around the world with my partner. I like traveling very much. I’d like to go to Italy someday. I sometimes go to Tokyo to see the architecture. It is a very interesting time for me. Second, I would like a partner who likes animals because I like animals very much. I want to have a dog in the future. I think a person who likes animals is kind person. Third, I would like a partner who likes eating because I like cooking very much. I want to cook a lot of dishes for him. When I cook, if he doesn't eat my dishes, I will feel very sad.

I think Yuri's paragraph is very good. I think you can write a good paragraph too.

Your first draft is due next Tuesday, 7 July 2010, at 6 pm;

Enjoy!

Toyo Gakuen University 応用英語1-3A Writing Students make fotobabbles about their special places

Today students in the writing class at Toyo Gakuen University made fotobabbles about their special places.

Image from fotobable facebook page.

Fotobabble is a web 2.0 application that, "enables you to create Talking Photos in just three clicks".
At the beginning of the class I returned the students second drafts of their "My Special Place" task. Like the first drafts, I error coded the second drafts. I didn't require the students to correct their second drafts before they recorded a fotobabble, and some students simply read and recorded their second drafts without any editing, but others were keen to edit. Perhaps this fotobabble task motivated some students to edit again.
Links to the students' fotobabbles are below. I hope you will view some of them and leave a comment for my students. Enjoy!


Akira's Special Place, Manae's Special Place, Kaname's Special Place, Aya Y.'s Special Place, Misato's Special Place, Koutarou's Special Place, Ryuhei's Special Place, Chen's Special Place, Reika's Special Place, Kohei's Special Place, Kousuke's Special Place, Kousei's Special Place,Tatsuya's Special Place, Atsuko's Special Place, Ai's Special Place, Aya S.'s Special Place. Rie's Special Place,

Toyo Gakuen University 応用英語1-3A Writing Task 2: My Special Place Final Draft

Hi everyone!
Today we are going to do the last draft of our paragraph about a special place. Then we are going to record the paragraph using Fotobabble. Look at the photo below. Click the play button.



OK,next, let's review some vocabulary. Click this link: 基礎英語ステップ２.

Now look at your first draft. Use your grammar error code handout. Correct your mistakes and write your final draft. You must submit your final draft by next Tuesday 22 June 2010. Next week you will make your own Fotobabble.

Toyo Gakuen University 応用英語1-3A Writing Lesson 7 Unit 2 My Special place

A special place, originally uploaded by mick62.

Hey there!

Today we are going to start the first draft of our second task: My Special Place.
First, let's study some vocabulary. Click this link: 基礎英語　ステップ1

Now let's go to Flickr. Click here: Flickr Sign in.
Comment on your classmates' photos of their special places. Ask the questions on p. 18 of your textbook. Answer your classmates' questions.

Ok now write your first draft. Please e-mail it to me by the 7th of June.
Enjoy!